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写高分文章
I'm sorry to hear that you are lonely in your new school.In my opinion,it is necessary to keep a good relationship with your classmates,which is of great importance in your daily life.Here are my suggestions on how to communicate with your friends.
First of all,you should greet your teachers and classmates when meeting them on campus.It is always easier to make new friends when you show your friendliness first.What's more,you should respect and trust your friends.As the old saying goes,“A friend in need is a friend indeed”.You'd better give them a helping hand if they are in trouble.Last but not least,it would be a good idea if you often take an active part in class activities,which is a good way for others to learn about you.
I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and begin to make new friends as soon as possible.
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句式锤炼——which 引导的非限制性定语从句
1.Last Sunday,our school held a 5km crosscountry running race,which attracted many enthusiastic participants,including both students and teachers.(2020·新高考山东卷满分作文)
上周日,我们学校举办了5公里越野跑比赛,吸引了许多热情的参与者,包括学生和老师。
2.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.(2020·浙江卷读后续写)
这只饥饿的熊顺着他的鼻子来到我们的营地,那里被高高的铁丝栅栏包围着。
3.After everyone concerned were seated,there was a ceremony of raising the national flag,which made us excited.(2020·天津卷满分作文)
相关人员入座后,举行了升旗仪式,这使大家都很兴奋。