一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。
(一)
Jim 看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中,他想到了那个姑娘。Jim 仍然喘着粗气,朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘,他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她,他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了,她安全了。姑娘许久没说话,接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道:“是你吗,爸爸?”
【参考范文】
Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly, he could sense her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishment he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you?”
【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语,丰富了表达形式,使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。