第一节短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was my sister’s 6th birthday. Moreover, the whole family went to a cafe for the birthday treat. She walked in, rocked her birthday crown with her name on it, that she made at school. A group of teenagers saw her and begin singing "Happy Birthday”. Her face just was lit up with excitement. Then other tables joined. Soon almost everyone there was singing “Happy Birthday” to my girl. She screamed joyful and gave high fives. It was an amazing experience for her and I was blew away by the Leenagers who saw a little girl and decided to make my day!
