Dear Chris,
①I'm writing to tell you that we will have a volleyball match next month.The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4th.We will play against the team from Hongxing High School.②In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practise hard.So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day.Please come to the school gym at 6:30 p.m.from Monday to Friday.
You're an excellent player.③With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game.Let's try hard together!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇美:文章运用了很多高级词汇,如take place, play against, in order to, get fully prepared, confident等。
2.句式美:①句I'm writing to tell you that ...为告知信开头常用语。
②句In order to后接动词原形,在句中作目的状语,比不定式作状语显得正式,也比in order that we can win the match简洁。
③句With you on the team是with复合结构作原因状语。confident后接that引导的宾语从句。